2009年12月15日火曜日

Blog Journal Assignment 2

My essay topic about bioethics is "abortion".
Abortion reflects the present social background, the value of life, and the status of women.This is my thesis statement.Recently, birth rate is declining , and there is a problem of whether abortion is murder or not. Moreover, these days, the status of women is getting higher. It is said that this is a generation when women can decide things on their own. I am interested in this. So, i chose this topic,abortion.

1 件のコメント:

  1. Hi Mana,

    You have an interesting topic, but we need to focus your thesis some more.

    There are three main factors that impact on the occurrence of abortion in Japanese society, the present social situation, the perceived value of life among Japanese people, and the economic status of women.

    Use this restatement of your thesis if you think it accurately reflects your thinking.

    Thanks!

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